They looked exactly like the pictures. Warm smiles, perfectly casual outfits, even the same “WELCOME” mat I’d seen on the rental listing. For a second, it all felt normal—like I’d made the right decision moving here, renting a room from a “nice couple” with good reviews.
But as I stepped onto the porch, something weird happened.
The wife didn’t move aside.
She just stood there, smiling too wide, eyes scanning me like she was trying to memorize everything—my shoes, my bag, the way I stood. The husband laughed at something I hadn’t said.
And then I noticed the doormat.
It didn’t match the one in the photos.
The one online had flowers printed on the corners and a small tear on the bottom left. I remember it because I’d zoomed in, wondering what kind of people lived here.
This one was brand new. Clean. Black with gold letters.
I blinked.
“You changed the mat?” I asked, casually.
The husband’s smile faltered—just a second. Then he said, “Oh, yeah, we switch them out sometimes. Seasonal thing.”
But it was 76 degrees and not a holiday in sight.
Still, I smiled, stepped inside.
And just as I crossed the threshold, I saw something sticking out from the umbrella stand by the door—something that definitely wasn’t in the photos either.
A red envelope.
With my name on it.
I froze. “Is that for me?” I asked, pointing to it.
The wife turned slowly, like she’d forgotten it was there. “Oh! Yes, that must be something left by the last guest. Probably a note. You know how sentimental people get.”
That didn’t make sense. Why would someone leave a note addressed to me if they were the last guest?
But I didn’t press it.
I picked it up. The handwriting was neat, almost too neat, and only had my first name—Sabrina.
“Can I open it now?” I asked.
“Sure, sure,” the husband said, ushering me further in. “Make yourself at home.”
I opened the envelope as we walked into the hallway. Inside was a single piece of paper, folded once.
It read, in bold black ink: DON’T TRUST THEM.
My stomach dropped.
I stopped walking. “What is this?”
They turned around with matching looks of confusion.
“What’s what?” the wife asked.
“This,” I said, holding it up. “It’s a note. It says not to trust you.”
The wife squinted like she couldn’t read it, then let out a nervous laugh. “Someone’s idea of a joke, I guess. We’ve had pranksters before. Teenagers.”
The husband added, “One time, they left fake lottery tickets in the mailbox.”
But this didn’t feel like a prank.
I should’ve left right then. But I didn’t.
I’d already paid for the month. I had nowhere else lined up. My car was full of stuff, and I was tired from the drive.
So I stayed.
They showed me the room. It was cleaner than I expected. White curtains, a small desk, a bed with fresh sheets. There was even a tiny welcome basket with snacks and a handwritten note—different handwriting this time—saying, “We’re so happy you’re here, Sabrina!”
I tried to shake off the feeling in my chest.
Maybe someone really had left a weird joke. Maybe I was just overthinking.
I unpacked my things. Ate a granola bar from the basket. Took a shower. By bedtime, the house felt quiet. Too quiet.
That night, I couldn’t sleep.
Around midnight, I heard footsteps outside my door. Soft. Slow.
They stopped, then started again—like someone pacing.
I held my breath.
Then I heard the sound of something being slid under the door.
I waited. Gave it a full five minutes before I got out of bed.
Another note.
This one was scribbled quickly: Check the attic. Before they do.
I stared at it for a long time.
There was no signature. No explanation.
Just that message.
I folded it up and tucked it into my bag. Decided I’d check the attic in the morning, when there was sunlight and at least a shred of courage left in me.
At breakfast, the couple acted normal.
Eggs. Toast. Fresh orange juice. The wife hummed a song while she cooked. The husband read the paper.
“So, sleep well?” he asked.
I nodded, lying.
“Any plans for today?” the wife chimed in.
“Just getting settled. Maybe check out the neighborhood.”
They smiled in sync. “Great idea.”
After breakfast, I excused myself and went back upstairs.
I looked around the hallway. There was a small hatch in the ceiling outside my door. No pull-down ladder, just a latch.
I dragged over a chair from my room and stood up. The hatch creaked open easily.
It was dark up there. Dusty. Smelled like mothballs.
I grabbed my phone and used the flashlight to peek inside.
Boxes. Old furniture. And something glinting in the back corner.
I climbed up slowly, careful not to make noise.
The glinting thing was a camera. Not pointed at me—pointed down, toward what must’ve been the hallway ceiling.
My heart started pounding.
Why would there be a camera in the attic?
I turned around to get out—and that’s when I saw the suitcase.
It was pink, scuffed, and had a faded airline tag still attached.
My hands shook as I unzipped it.
Inside were clothes. Makeup. A diary.
The first page had a name: Maya Thompson.
And below that, in shaky handwriting: If you’re reading this, I didn’t leave on my own.
I nearly dropped the diary.
I flipped through a few more pages. Maya had written about how friendly the couple seemed. How she was happy to find a place so last-minute. Then the entries got darker.
She wrote about being watched.
About hearing footsteps at night.
About a locked basement door.
The last entry just said: I think they know I’m snooping.
I shoved the diary into my bag and climbed down as fast as I could.
I didn’t know what to do.
Call the cops? But what would I say?
I hadn’t seen anything illegal. Just creepy.
Still, I couldn’t stay.
I started packing.
But before I could finish, there was a knock on my door.
I shoved the diary under my pillow and opened it slightly.
It was the wife.
“Hey, we’re heading out for groceries,” she said. “Need anything?”
I shook my head.
She smiled again, that too-wide smile. “Alright then. Lock up if you leave!”
As soon as I heard the front door shut, I grabbed my stuff.
I was halfway down the stairs when I heard something—movement from the basement.
They hadn’t left.
I panicked and ran to the front door.
It was locked.
I fumbled with the knob, and that’s when I noticed—there was no keyhole. Just a small digital pad above the handle.
It beeped suddenly.
“Leaving so soon?” the husband’s voice came from behind me.
I spun around.
He was standing at the bottom of the stairs, holding something behind his back.
The wife appeared beside him.
I backed up toward the door. “I—I forgot I had an appointment.”
“You didn’t even finish unpacking,” she said sweetly.
“I’ll be back. Just need to grab something.”
They looked at each other.
Then the husband said, “We can’t let you do that, Sabrina.”
I bolted.
Ran down the hallway and ducked into the kitchen. Slammed the door and shoved a chair under the handle.
They started banging immediately.
I looked around. There was a small window above the sink. I climbed onto the counter and shoved it open.
It was tight, but I pushed through.
Fell into the bushes outside.
I didn’t stop running.
I ran down the block, flagged the first car I saw. A woman in her 40s rolled down the window.
“Please,” I panted. “Call the police.”
She did.
When the cops arrived and searched the house, they found the basement door locked from the outside.
Inside were chains, an old mattress, and dozens of women’s belongings—purses, phones, suitcases.
Including Maya Thompson’s ID.
Turned out, the couple had been running a fake rental scheme for months, maybe years.
Luring women in. Keeping some of them.
Others? No one knew.
Maya was never found.
But because of her notes, because of her suitcase, the police were finally able to open a real investigation.
The couple was arrested.
I had to testify later, but that was okay.
I moved out of town after that. Found a real place. A safe place.
Sometimes, I still think about that red envelope.
Who left it? Was it Maya? Someone before her?
Maybe it was just karma—trying to balance the scales.
What I know for sure is this:
Trust your gut.
If something feels off, it probably is.
And never ignore a doormat that doesn’t match the photo.
You might be walking into more than just a bad rental.
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