So this bus was packed, but somehow I managed to snag a window seat near the back. I had my hood up, music in, but not too loud—just enough to drown out most of the chatter. I noticed two girls across the aisle, one sitting normal, the other kind of crumpled on the floor between the seats, half-leaning on her friend’s legs like she was trying to disappear. I figured they were tired or maybe just cramped for space.
At first, I didn’t pay much attention. But then I heard my name.
Like… my actual name.
I paused my music. Sat completely still. They weren’t whispering, exactly, but it was one of those low, rushed voices like they knew they shouldn’t be talking about it.
The girl with the ponytail was saying something like, “…she doesn’t even know we were at her place that night. Dariel said she saw the texts, but we wiped everything… right?”
Her friend didn’t answer right away. Just kept scrolling on her phone, and muttered, “Unless she finds the backup folder. I think he forgot to delete it.”
That was when my heart dropped.
Dariel is my roommate.
My phone buzzed in my lap. I didn’t dare look at it. My hands felt like they didn’t belong to me anymore.
I sat there, frozen, trying to keep my breathing normal. They didn’t see me glance down toward the aisle, where their black backpack was half-unzipped… with something inside that looked way too familiar.
That’s when the girl on the floor looked up, eyes scanning the bus… and stopped directly on me.
Her eyes widened just slightly. Not full panic, but enough to say: Oh crap. I looked away fast, pretending to be zoned out. But my heart was sprinting. Every word they’d just said was echoing in my head.
What the hell were they doing at my place? What did they wipe?
I started connecting dots I hadn’t even realized were floating around. My favorite necklace missing. The weird way Dariel had started acting distant. The half-lie he told about staying with his cousin that weekend.
I didn’t know these two girls, but I knew they knew something. And that thing in their bag—it looked a lot like the sketchbook I thought I’d lost months ago. The one with all my original designs.
I waited until the bus jolted slightly—a pothole maybe—and I used the motion to subtly lean forward just enough to get a clearer look into the bag.
My sketchbook. No doubt. My initials were on the spine.
I sat back quickly, my palms damp. My mind was running wild. Were they working with Dariel? Why would he let someone steal from me? What texts did they see?
I had to be careful. I couldn’t confront them here, not on a moving bus full of strangers. And I had no proof—yet.
So I did something I hadn’t done in years. I pulled out a notebook and started writing everything I could remember from their conversation. Names. Times. Words. Then I did a quick scan of my own phone, found the cloud backup folder they’d mentioned.
And sure enough… a folder named “Misc_1224” was sitting in plain sight. I clicked it.
My eyes watered immediately. Screenshots. Personal messages. Voice notes. Some were mine. Some were from Dariel to someone named “Ryn,” which I now assumed was the girl with the ponytail.
And worse—there were photos from my room. Angled like they’d been taken in a rush. My jewelry tray. My desk drawers open. One of my bras flung over a chair.
I clenched my teeth. They’d broken into my place. Maybe with Dariel’s help. Or maybe he just let them in.
My stomach turned. That wasn’t just betrayal. That was a whole different level.
The bus started to slow. Downtown. The next stop was mine. I saw the girl on the floor nudge her friend.
“Let’s get off here,” she said, too loud. “I need air.”
I knew what that meant. They’d realized I’d heard too much.
I let them stand first, then casually stood and followed them off the bus. I stayed a few paces behind, phone in hand, pretending to text.
They turned down a side street. I waited, ducked behind a postbox, and watched. They disappeared into a red-brick building that looked like some kind of co-working space.
I stood there shaking. Then I called the one person I trusted no matter what.
My cousin Rae picked up on the second ring.
“Hey, you good?”
“No,” I whispered. “I think Dariel helped people break into my place. And they’re using my designs.”
Silence.
Then, “Where are you?”
I gave her the cross street.
“I’m coming. Don’t go anywhere.”
Fifteen minutes later, she pulled up in her dusty Civic, and I climbed in, still trembling.
We drove back to her place, and I showed her the folder. The photos. The stolen designs.
She didn’t say much, just set her jaw in that way she does when she’s making a plan.
Rae worked part-time with a community legal aid group. She knew people. And more importantly, she knew how to move quietly.
Over the next week, we did some digging.
We found that “Ryn” had started posting designs online under her own name. My designs. She even entered a local competition with them and made it to the finals.
Dariel, meanwhile, had ghosted me. Moved out without a word. Left me half the rent and none of the furniture.
But Rae had a friend who pulled some strings and got us access to the competition panel under the pretense of verifying design originality.
We printed out timestamps from my cloud storage. Old drafts. Concept sketches. I even had a video of me explaining one of the designs in real time to an art blog months ago.
It was airtight.
We brought it all to the competition organizers anonymously.
Three days later, I got a call.
“Hi, is this Nalia Winters?”
“Yes?”
“We’ve had a submission flagged for plagiarism—designs that appear to be originally yours. Can you come in to verify?”
I showed up with everything. Even brought the original sketchbook. The organizer, a stern but kind woman named Risa, took one look and sighed.
“These were clearly yours. We’ll be disqualifying the other entry and issuing a public apology.”
That was satisfying. But I wasn’t done.
With Rae’s help, we filed a police report. Between the digital evidence and a quiet confession Dariel had stupidly texted to one of his old friends, the case was strong enough to at least start a proper investigation.
Ryn and her floor-friend, whose name turned out to be Jessa, were banned from every creative competition in the county. Dariel was formally charged with aiding in illegal entry and theft of intellectual property.
But the real twist came two weeks later.
I got an email from a boutique design house based in Montreal.
“Hi Nalia, we came across your original work through the recent plagiarism case and wanted to say—we’re sorry that happened. But we were incredibly impressed by your style. Would you be open to chatting about a collaboration?”
I nearly dropped my phone.
We scheduled a call. One thing led to another. And by the end of the month, I’d signed a short-term contract to design a spring collection.
What started as the worst betrayal of my life turned into my big break.
Rae and I toasted with cheap wine in her kitchen that night. I hugged her hard.
“I still can’t believe all this,” I said.
She smirked. “Well, karma has a long memory. Sometimes it just needs a little push.”
Looking back, I realized something.
If I hadn’t been on that bus… if I hadn’t had my music just low enough… if I hadn’t been brave enough to listen, write it down, take it seriously—none of this would’ve come to light.
Sometimes the universe whispers. And sometimes, it speaks right in your ear with a shaky bus seat and two careless thieves.
Either way, you’ve got to listen.
So yeah, maybe that bus ride wasn’t supposed to happen. But I’m so glad it did.
And I’ll never ignore a gut feeling again.
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